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~~ "Axolotl" by
Julio Cortázar ~~

PRINTER FRIENDLY
Which
of these terms would you say describes the boy in "Axolotl"?
Fascination
(Dictionary)
The state of being intensely interested (as by awe or terror)
Obsession
(Dictionary)
1: an irrational motive for performing trivial or repetitive actions
against your will [syn: compulsion] 2: an unhealthy and compulsive
preoccupation with something or someone [syn: fixation]
Empathy
(Wikipedia)
Empathy
is the experience of awareness of the thoughts, emotions or concerns of
others. Empathy is often characterized as the ability to put oneself
into another persons "place." Humans experience empathy or feel
empathic many times when they see another person or animal during a
positive or negative experience. One must be careful not to confuse
empathy with sympathy which characterized as the experience of similar
emotions to another person.
Most
psychologists and researchers believe empathy is an acquired trait
which you begin to learn at a young age until late adolescence. Other
theories state that empathy is innate in higher mammals as shown in
tests performed on infant children….
Closely
related concepts are compassion and sympathy.
The
empathy reflex is exploited to a certain extent in all kinds of
fiction; we may identify deeply with characters appearing in a text or
on a screen. It is also possible to identify with a person of the other
sex or an animal. Empathy is thought to be a driving psychological
force behind the animal rights movement.
Some
students of animal behavior claim that empathy is not restricted to
humans as the definition implies. Examples include dolphins saving
humans from drowning or from shark attacks, and a multitude of
behaviors observed in primates, both in captivity and in the wild.
Empathy
may be painful: seeing the pain of others….
Related to the topic of empathy is the concept of "emotional
intelligence." You can research this concept at Wikipedia.org (which
provides a useful overview) and see how you would characterize the
boy's emotional intelligence.
How
does the boy become fascinated by the axolotl in the first place?
- He's
alone, on his bike, looking for something to do…friendless? It seems
so, since we never see him with a friend
- Out
of boredom? Loneliness?
- Our
of dissatisfaction with his ordinary routine—he's usually attracted to
the more popular animals, the lions and the panthers (see the Rilke poem, "The Panther") but this day they
are disappointing. The lions are "sad and ugly" and the panther is
"asleep." So he goes into the "dark, humid aquarium" and "unexpectedly"
he "hits it off" with the axolotls.
What
is the boy's initial reaction to the axolotls?
They
seem to capture his imagination, fascinate him. He reads the card, and
later he goes to the library to find out even more about them, but
ultimately it's not information from a book that he's seeking. These
factual details aren't exactly what interest him. If you look at those
details, they're the normal kinds of things that you'd find in an
encyclopedia or dictionary about a particular animal: They're a species
of Mexican salamander (but he already knows this from looking at their
"little pink Aztec faces"); they can live on land or water; they're
edible; their oil was used like cod—liver oil. But the problem with
these facts is that they really tell him next to nothing about what
it's like to be an axolotl. They treat these animals, these living,
breathing creatures that have captured the boy's imagination, like
inanimate objects. Empathy tells him they are far from inanimate. When
we turn a human being into an object to be exploited, we call that
"dehumanization." What do we call it when we turn animals into objects?
But we find it acceptable (for the most part) to turn animals into
objects, unless they are our pets, forgetting that they are living,
breathing creatures like us. This boy isn't looking for facts; he's
looking for an experience. And he gets it.
What
do these little details tell you about this particular boy?
- He's
sensitive; he's open to new experiences. He's imaginative. He's
independent.
- He
may be lonely but even if he is, he makes very rich use of his solitude.
What's
the nature of his fascination?
- His
fascination leads to a growing empathy, which leads to feelings of
guilt (for the creature's imprisonment, it seems). At first, watching
them sit there motionless, he thought he understood "their secret will,
to abolish space and time with an indifferent immobility." But the boy
later realizes that there is no romantic "secret will" and that their
immobility has nothing to do with abolishing space and time; he
realizes that captivity is a horrible burden, an oppressive nightmare;
they want to be free like any creature, swimming freely, not sitting
immobile in a cage.
- Early
on and throughout he associates the axolotl with Aztecs, the native
Mexicans who were vanquished by the Europeans, the Spanish… the
axolotls have "eyes of gold" (Aztec gold); they are "silent and
immobile" like ancient statues that serve as reminders of the
civilization and the people who were brutally conquered. These eyes,
like the eyes of statues may "lack any life, but they are looking"—they
see into us and we try to see into them. He directly likens the axolotl
to a "statuette corroded by time" (425). He explains that it's the eyes
which fascinate ("obsess") him the most. They represent "another way of
seeing" that is now a mystery he wants to penetrate. "The golden eyes
continued burning with their soft, terrible light; they continued
looking at me from an unfathomable depth which made me dizzy" (426).
- He
begins to identify with the axolotls. He knows they look nothing like
human beings, like monkeys do, but he sees the "humanity" in them
nevertheless." When he claims the axolotl's were "not animals" (426)
what do you think he's driving at?
- Once
he takes the step of recognizing their "humanity" (we don't have a word
for what he wants to describe!) he begins to imagine them aware as a
human being is aware. He imagines they are conscious of their
condition, as we are. The plaintive cry he imagines is "Save us, save
us." It doesn't get more empathetic than that. On another level, the
axolotls may be "Aztecs" (who were also considered subhuman "savages")
and who also might still be "saved." Once he hears this plea, he begins
to feel ashamed, ignoble. Something is taking shape from the larval
stage (axolotls never leave their larval stage) that he fears. Some
retribution for the cruelty of this imprisonment maybe? He ends up
imprisoned along with them in the end. His empathy is so complete that
he can't entirely leave them even when he stops visiting.
- His
conscience goes on overdrive: they are "devouring me slowly with their
eyes, in a cannibalism of gold" (427). Just thinking of them places him
beside the cage. The eyes never close; they are always with him. He
can't escape his feelings of empathy.
- Finally
he acknowledges that the axolotls are suffering, that they are "lying
in wait for something, a remote dominion destroyed, an age of liberty
when the world had been that of the axolotls" (427). They are lying in
wait for their freedom, and meanwhile they are in "liquid hell." This
realization is what allows him to penetrate finally into their world,
because it is the "truth." (How do we know it's the truth? We can only
empathize.)
- From
that point on, the identity of the boy is confused; is he now an
axolotl or a boy? Does empathy always involve a kind of split, a kind
of fracturing of identity? Double vision? He feels "trapped." In what
way is empathy a kind of painful trap? Should we avoid it? (Not
everyone has it or wants to have it.) Do you think the story warns
against empathy or encourages it?
What
does the story "mean"?
We can
justify thematic statements like:
- Empathy
is painful.
- It's
possible for humans and animals to experience a "meeting of the minds."
- Like
the axolotl imprisoned in its cage, the soul is trapped inside the body.
But
those kinds of summary meanings, while they may be justified, seem so
inadequate.
Let's
leave that question open and answer it with a quote from commentator
Susan Nayel: "The nightmare of being trapped inside the body of a beast
is the human's experience, and the panic of being abandoned by the man
is the axolotl's final cry. The only hope, as noted by the axolotl, is
the creation of art where the writer can become another and communicate
on behalf of all creatures—expressing the feelings of all creatures so
that none may fee the terror of isolation and imprisonment."
Compare this story to Rainer Marie Rilke's
poem "The Panther."
Read the "The Panther"
In "The Panther" by modern German poet Rainer Marie
Rilke, you have a powerful example of extended personification, a very
close observation which readers can interpret as the writer’s empathy
with his subject. Where does the subject end and the object
begin? As in “Axolotl,” they seem melted together.
Throughout the poem, the panther is invested with human feeling, just
as in “Axolotl” the salamander is invested with human
consciousness. In both works, you could ask whether it is that
the speaker, observing the caged animal, identifies with the pain of
his imprisonment, or whether he is in fact projecting his own pain upon
what he the object of his observation. Whichever way that river
flows, “The Panther” and “Axolotl” are both powerful testaments to the
wonder and pain of empathy.
Reading this poem, we might ask: is it that the panther is able to
communicate his pain, breaking across the boundaries that separate our
species, and the speaker is sensitive to the panther’s pain? As the
poem opens, the speaker tells us that the panther’s vision has “grown
so weary” and that his eyes seem blank, they “can’t hold anything
else.” But does the speaker really know what the panther sees or
if he’s weary? He takes further liberties in the third line,
announcing that “It seems to him there are a thousand bars;/ and behind
the bars, no world.” Does the speaker really know what the
panther is thinking here? Empathy seems to have given him the
liberty to assume that this is what the panther is thinking. The
empathy he feels is projected upon the panther; he “identifies” with
it. Once we accept that projection, once we suspend our
disbelief, a powerful story emerges. From within that cruel
cage—which might represent any sort of loss of freedom—the world
disappears; any normal vision, normal behavior, is suspended and
actions are mere motions, with no force of will behind them. Life
becomes “going through the motions.” Free will (my favorite topic
this semester) is paralyzed—there’s no action but empty ritual.
What happens next is almost too sad, too difficult to
contemplate. That unasked for but inevitable glimpse of freedom
appears momentarily, that whisper of possibility as the “curtain of the
pupils lifts, quietly—.” It’s not a real possibility of freedom
because the bars haven’t disappeared. The bars are still there.
But the “image enters in.” It’s almost too painful to
imagine! That momentary glimpse of freedom tears through every
muscle, plunging into the heart, knife-like, leaving the poor creature
(the panther, the speaker, both?) to suffer.
Even if you read the poem literally and aren’t interested in pursuing
other levels of meaning (what might the panther symbolize, and so on),
it’s an incredibly sad portrait. It’s precisely the reason why I
can’t have a good time visiting zoos. I know they do a lot of
good work. But the sight of all those caged creatures!!! My
reaction is always very much like the boy’s in “Axolotl.” If I
allow my fascination to draw me in I become guilt-ridden and horrified;
it’s as if I’m trapped in there with them. I’ll never forget a
certain grizzly bear at the St. Louis Zoo in Forest Park (I used to
live across the street from it, and went there often when my daughter
was stroller-bound)…I still remember the disturbing way it used to pace
endlessly in that “ritual dance around a center,” which Rilke describes
so brilliantly, unable to go anywhere or do anything which would make
it feel like a real bear with real purpose and a real will. It
was so obviously in misery, like this panther. On the other hand,
the polar bears a few hundred feet away were pretty cheerful, usually
playing with their big red rubber ball, splashing in their pool,
rolling around. If you wanted to leave in anything like a good
mood, you would check in on them and walk very quickly past the grizzly
bear, trying not to look.
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