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Lit
165: Imaginary Worlds
Stepping through Dante’s Inferno

Canto 1, 2
- Dante escapes the dark wood (see the
notes “INFERNO: Analyzing
Canto I”) with Virgil’s help; he decides to go on this journey into the
“eternal place”—out of time, out of mind—where he’ll witness the
torment and despair of all those who’ve “lost the good of intellect.”
- He struggles with his choice; his
weakness and confusion are not
the only obstacles fear and doubt are also holding him back.
Virgil acts as a “persuader”—notice all the emphasis in these first two
cantos on “choice”; no one is ordered to do anything—all action is
chosen.
- The Virgin Mary (never named, only
suggested) chooses to take
pity on Dante because of his sweet love poetry—she sees the good in
him; she persuades St. Lucia to get involved. (Her pity is appropriate,
because pity is only appropriate for those who are alive and can be
helped by it. But pity has to lead to action; it can’t just sit
idly by—that’s the mistake of the Neutrals in Canto III.)
- St. Lucia persuades Beatrice to get
involved
- Beatrice persuades Virgil to get
involved
- Virgil persuades Dante (inspires him
really) to get over his
fear, to have some courage and make the journey.
- Dante decides to go; but then at the
start of Canto 2 he
“unchooses his own choice/and thinking again undoes what he has
started,/so I became; a nullifying unease overcame my soul”
- Virgil had persuaded Dante to go but
Dante is really weak and
lost and hesitant; he rides an emotional rollercoaster in these first
few cantos, he seems ruled by negative emotions like fear and
despair. They’re in danger of consuming him.
- At the start of Canto II, Dante the Poet
(the narrator) addresses
the muses by calling on the “genius” of art and of memory; but think
about that: what’s this story going to be—truth or fiction? A
fictional tale artistically told, or the revelation of true
experience? What’s the difference? Are art and memory
different or the same? Is Dante calling on his muse to help him
express what he “remembers” more than what he’s inventing (“art”)
because this text, this poem is “revelation” and not “imagination”
(literature, an epic poem)? Is Dante writing a mystical, mythic
text or a literary text? The question is raised about the
difference between the two. What’s the difference between an
author’s (or mine, or your) individual “vision of truth” in a dream, in
a flash of insight, in a sudden epiphany, and a “revelation”? Is
there really any difference at all, except what the teller and the
listener choose to believe about it? There are several
interesting places in this poem (at the end of Canto XVI, for
instance) where Dante explores that line between “truth” and
“fiction” and arrives at a profound understanding of “literary
truth.” What does it mean to say that a work of literature is
true, when we know it has the “face of lies” (XVI.108)?
- At the beginning of Canto II (line 5),
we’re introduced to the
“strife of pity” theme—Dante’s struggle with pity. This is one of
the major conflicts explored in the book—this is the WAR, the inner
battle that will ensue when Dante has to face the unrelenting pain of
“divine justice.” He has to learn to appreciate that the painful
punishments are deserved, and this means learning about the nature of
evil in all its guises—in others but also in himself, because if you
can’t understand a thing, you’ll never in a million years be able to
transcend it. To say he has to “lose his pity” for the sinners in
the inferno sounds terrible at first. It sounds inhuman,
unsympathetic, uncompassionate! But if you look at it another
way, it also can mean to lose self-pity, which is the up-side.
When you lose self-pity, you’re accepting responsibility. You’re
holding others responsible and you’re holding yourself
responsible. Accountability replaces pity. Which do you
ultimately prefer? You may think you want pity for your
suffering, but if pity prevents you from taking responsibility and
making better choices, which would you prefer?
- Canto II characterizes Dante in various
ways. We’ve already
seen some of his down-side; he’s lost, confused, weak,
wishy-washy—we’ve already seen that line where he “unchooses his
choice” and stands there paralyzed. But he’s also humble.
He has humility instead of pride. Virgil, by contrast, is a
victim of pride a lot. But also, by comparing himself to Aeneas
and St. Paul, he’s cuing his readers to recall those other vivid trips
to the underworld. This will be a lot like those; but Dante will
give it his own personal twist, don’t worry.
- Fear is an emotion that’s explored in
these first several cantos;
it’s shown to be both a positive and negative emotion. On the
negative side, fear is one of those primitive, powerful animalistic
emotions, an instinct that can threaten to control you if you don’t
respond with some kind of noble emotion like “courage.” Virgil
calls Dante a coward, and compares him to a “shying beast.” So on
the negative side, fear can make us behave primitively; but on the
positive side, there’s the “fear of God” which motivates us to act
morally and which is a form of grace. Fear is also a positive
form of energy that compels Dante to want to get out of the dark
wood. Without fear he may have rotted there. Virgil
counteracts Dante’s fear with LOVE, a more powerful, noble, Godly
emotion…. He inspires Dante by demonstrating how the three ladies
in heaven all love him enough to be concerned about his welfare.
The presence of LOVE makes Dante (figuratively, in a simile)
“bloom,” it gives him renewed courage and strength.
It’s like a steroid shot right to his veins. Beatrice is Dante’s
great love; to know that she loves him too is more powerful than fear.
- Beatrice is part of the chain of
persuasion, as we noted before.
But one other thing she says is noteworthy, too. She says that
her friend Dante is “no friend of fortune.” Disregard for a minute that
“fortune” is personified, and this personified fortune has it in for
Dante. The message is that good fortune or bad fortune can’t
begin to compare to the kind of heavenly help that the three ladies
represent. Who needs fortune when you have all of these angelic
spirits taking care of you? Who needs things to work out well
here on this finite earth (fame and fortune) when heaven is eternal and
favors you with good odds, 3 to 1? Dante’s confusion stems partly
from his wrong orientation, remember—he has his priorities all
wrong. But how many of us are just like Dante, defining our
happiness by how “fortunate” we are—by how much we have or don’t have,
whether that’s riches or respect? When Dante learns (later) to
disregard his “bad fortune”—he has his future told and finds out it’s
all going downhill—he’s really made some spiritual progress. When
he accepts his “fortune” for whatever it is and doesn’t care, that’s
really another way of saying he accepts his “fate” (because fortune and
fate are almost synonymous in this context). I may not control
fate, but I control my reaction to it. I’m in charge of how I
respond, and I can respond with courage, faith, and fortitude rather
than fear and despair.
- The effect is that Dante is persuaded;
he’s inspired to move
on. He expresses this through a simile; but notice how he’s still
emphasizing his freedom. He’s blossoming like one “set free.”
- Dante tells Virgil that he’ll be the
student and Virgil will be
the teacher; he the pupil, Virgil the master, and that they’ll “share
one will.” Sounds like a good intention, but is it
possible? But the relationship is rocky, as we’ll see. Is
it possible for a teacher and a student to “share one will”?
- One psychological truth we’re left with
when we consider the
events so far: fear inhibits freedom. It’s courage that sets us
free, giving us the ability to fight through the paralysis of fear and
take meaningful action. But where does that courage come
from? In Dante’s case it comes from outside himself, from others
who he imagines care about him, who are fighting for him, who want to
save him. When others believe in us, we become that much more
powerful. Without that kind of support, we are apt to feel
inadequate or foolish. But when others believe in us, we begin to
believe in ourselves. Dante is imagining the dead Beatrice alive
again in heaven, a Beatrice who cares about him; and his hero, Virgil,
also imagined, seems to think he’s worthy, too, so off he goes.
So even when there’s no one really there, as there was no one really
there for Dante in exile, there’s still the power of the
imagination. Never underestimate it!
Canto 3
- Begins with the inscription.
Analyze it—it’s interesting
what there.
- The worst places in the Inferno are in a
“city”—a “city of
woe.” Why is the image of the city an appropriate one for a place
that punishes people? The city is a place of human
habitation. It’s a human place. These are human sins, human
sinners. The only right environment would be a city.
- The goal of the Inferno is JUSTICE.
That’s what fulfilled
here. The abstract concept of “justice” is a strictly human
invention, a human aspiration. We seek it and we crave it,
especially when we’ve been the victims of “injustice.” What is
that need for justice that we have? Why can’t we be satisfied
with the “law of the jungle”—where the weak are devoured by the strong
and that’s that? The need for justice is an expression of our
need for order and meaning. What’s the meaning of the weak being
devoured by the strong? It’s brutal, brutish,
animalistic—suitable for animals but not for us because we’re creatures
of reason as much as we are creatures of muscle. The only way to
create justice is to exercise not muscle, then, but reason; to exercise
wisdom (and a shot of love doesn’t hurt). Real justice only
exists outside of time, in the realm of the imagination, of myth.
Real justice is a myth. It doesn’t exist anywhere, so to enjoy
it, to feel the warmth of it, we have to create it ourselves, which is
what Dante does in this book—and that is what the inscription helps him
declare. “Abandon all hope, ye who enter here.” Famous
words. What do they mean? Real Hell, the perfect justice of
hell, is the total removal of hope. When you are in a place of no
hope, you are in Dante’s inferno.
- The journey begins at a portal, a
gate. The gate motif runs
through the book (and through literature in general!)—the many gates
that the travelers pass through help us mark where they are, help us
understand their passage. Sometimes they run into difficulties
passing through the many gates they encounter, and these are usually
the more dramatic scenes in the work.
- The people in hell have no hope; they’ve
“lost the good of
intellect”—which means they’ve lost all ability to reason; they’ve lost
all sense of what’s true, reasonable, rational, intelligent, sane,
humane. They’re “animals” in that sense; they’re able to retain
their inward and outward wits (the 10 senses) but these are just used
against them, to increase their suffering.
- Virgil is a patient teacher…Q +A session
goes well. Virgil
compassionately takes Dante by the hand to try to lead him, but Dante
breaks down weeping as soon as he hears the cries. This develops
his character (he’s emotional, sympathetic) and he’s confused, placing
his pity where it doesn’t belong. He’s battling his pity from the
start.
- Dante’s graphic description is in strong
evidence as this canto
gets underway. In this passage it’s sound. Sound embodies
emotion so vividly and Dante uses this to get us to feel the scene and
not just understand it.
- Our first introduction to Dante’s system
of “contrapasso”:
Contrapasso
is Dante’s system of punishment in which the punishment poetically
suits crime. The punishments reflect the crime, sometimes by
being extremely similar in nature to the crime, but sometimes because
they are mirror images.
The Neutrals: In life they
never took sides; they never took a stand. They only wanted to
sit on the fence, be invisible, look out for number one instead of
looking out for doing what’s right. As a result they are spending
eternity chasing a meaningless “whirling banner” in circles. Not
only that but they are continually swarmed by stinging wasps and flies,
their blood, sweat and tears providing a “harvest” for maggots
underfoot. Nice!
Paolo and Francesca:
While alive they succumbed to their uncontrolled passion for one
another, their adulterous lust. Their sin was illicit sex, and so
they’re spending eternity having gained the very thing they sought in
life, locked in that most intimate embrace eternally without pause or
relief, blown about by the hurricane winds that represent the winds of
passion which tossed them about in life. All they wanted was to
be together and now they’re together.
Count Ugolino:
This
is one of the more gruesome characters we meet towards the end of the
book. On the way into the 9th circle, Dante finds “Count Ugolino
straddling his former friend and co-conspirator, whose brain he now and
then rips into with his teeth. After all, it was this particular friend
who betrayed, arrested and then starved him, along with his sons, to
death. Ugolino ate his children to survive just a short while
longer. Now he tells Dante, “I am the perfect contrapasso.” And it’s
hard to argue with him.
Lucifer:
At the
bottom of the pit, in the very center of the Inferno, the King of Hell
is himself a contrapasso, spouting three heads that contrast his former
glory as a majestic angel representing all of heaven's cardinal
virtues: Love, Divine Omnipotence, and Wisdom.
His battle with God has
left him the mirror image of his former self. His hairy, frozen
body is covered in scales instead of feathered wings, his three heads
(one red for Hatred, one yellow for Impotence, and one black for
Ignorance) contrast the three highest virtues of heaven.
- But here in Canto III, the Neutrals’
contrapasso is the first
that Dante witnesses. He hears their incredible agony (the
graphic wailing music that assails his ears when he steps through the
Gate are the cries of the Neutrals, the nobodies, the nameless,
faceless multitudes who just conformed without giving their conformity
an ounce of real thought). They went along because that was the easiest
thing to do; even when they knew what they were doing might be wrong,
they did it anyway, because it was easier. Their only real goal
in life was to be invisible, to sit on the fence and never declare
sides, never stand out. Now they really are identityless; Virgil
explains that all memory of them is extinguished. The world is
completely deaf to their cries. (Though he’s wrong, because Dante
hasn’t been deaf.) Virgil urges Dante to ignore them. To move
along and leave them. But Dante is too fascinated to immediately
move on, and he notices that they are being punished. they are spending
eternity chasing that meaningless “whirling banner” in circles, going
nowhere. The wasps and flies and the maggots continually prick
them.
- Why are the Neutrals so guilty?
What are they guilty
of? Why is it such a “sin” to refrain from taking sides?
Why these harsh (medieval) punishments? What if there weren’t a
side to take? What if both sides had good points, or both sides
were wrong, or they were equally right? Dante insists that you
can’t live in a morally relative world; you can’t close the shutters
and stay out of the fray. You have to decide on right and
wrong. In this world that’s absolute and consequential and
meaningful, there is always a right and a wrong and it’s every person’s
responsibility to define what that is. The opposite would be to
remain complacent or, worse, paralyzed with indecision, or worse yet,
hunkered down in a self-serving, blasé relativism. To know
what’s right and what’s wrong and to hide behind relativism, to “play
it safe,” would be a sign of great moral and spiritual and intellectual
and psychological cowardice. To rationalize doing the wrong thing
is a form of cowardice, too. Punishable by wasp and maggot.
If your conscience never pricked you hard enough while you were alive,
then here’s a few pricks to welcome you to eternity.
- A scene in the teacher/pupil drama:
around line 63 (p. 21,
bottom), Virgil tells Dante to stop asking questions and observe.
If he’s going to learn anything, he has to look for himself and not
always expect things to explained to him.
- Elsewhere we noted how in the structure
of the work, Virgil
frequently moves to protect Dante from the various demons and monsters
that threaten him along their journey. These are simple scenes on
the surface, but beneath the surface everywhere in this book one cares
to look, there is more going on than meets the eye, more levels of
meaning to explore. For instance, when Virgil moves to protect
Dante from Charon (who looks pretty demonic with his “grizzled jaws”
and the “red wheels of flame” circling his eyes) he invokes the higher
power and says “Charon, do not rage:/ Thus is it willed where
everything may be /Simply if it is willed” (lines 77-79). That’s
a fancy way of saying, “you are powerless, move over and stop wasting
our time.” But this fancy way has a very subtle message sitting
there like a little mental time bomb between the lines. Perhaps
without intending to, though Dante the Poet certainly intends us to
discover it, Virgil is expressing the significant difference between
divine will and human “free will.” Human will, guided by reason,
may intend whatever noble thing it pleases, but it’s pathetically
corruptible, vulnerable to an overthrow at any moment by the force of
powerful emotional drives we lose control over. The Divine will,
by contrast, as Virgil tells us here, is carried out as simply as it is
willed; there is no struggle at all. There are no energies of the
body to suppress; there’s just pure, simple will followed by right,
reasonable action. We can aspire, can’t we?
- Dante uses one of his vivid similes to
describe the souls
flocking to Charon’s boat. He’s struggling to understand why they
seem so eager to get to the Inferno. What makes this simile so
powerful? It is really evocative because in addition to being
graphic and vivid, it underscores the work’s theme that that sinners in
the Inferno are substandard human beasts (who’ve lost the good of
intellect, remember). The image of the souls falling like leaves,
inevitably that is, into Charon’s boat comes from Virgil’s Aeneid, but
Dante deepens it, enriches it, gives the pagan source its new Christian
spin. Here in Dante the “fallen leaves” are connected to Adam’s
“fall” to earth from Paradise. These are fallen souls, “Adam’s evil
seed.” They are transformed, devolved, into plant life with vegetable
soul in this image—and accordingly, their movement is involuntary, the
result of someone else’s will, not their own. The falcon image
emphasizes another devolution to animal soul—a little higher than a
plant, but still no free will of their own; these are “trained falcons”
responding to their master’s command.
- When Dante recalls how the ground began
to shake violently, he
shudders to remember it. Dante the Poet has the full benefit of
the full experience behind him; he’s got the fear of God and the proper
respect—he’s the one shuddering and shaking just remembering it.
Meanwhile Dante the Pilgrim is, at this point in the journey, literally
and figuratively “all shook up.” As the earth shakes him good, he
faints away, “as though seized by sleep”—but it’s not “sleep,” it’s
shock and awe. He shuts down.
Canto 4 … Circle 1, Limbo
- When Dante “wakes up” at the start of
this canto, does that seem
at all connected to the his waking up from sleep in first canto?
Is there any sign of progression? This time he’s “startled” from
sleep, awoken “as though by force” by a loud peal of thunder. It’s not
by force, though. Any significance to that? Is there any
significance to his “rested eyes”?
- He’s in Limbo, the eternal “waiting room”
for the virtuous but
unbaptized, which includes all of those unfortunate to have been born
and died before the birth of Christ and so, though they may be good
people, missed out on salvation by being born too early (oh well!)—and
also babies who weren’t yet baptized before dying. The souls in
Limbo are not “punished”—their only punishment is that they know
they’ll never leave and they’ll never see God or paradise.
- Virgil tells him they’re going to descend
into the “sightless
zone”—the sightlessness is a kind of non-enlightenment, an
anti-enlightenment. These are the people who have refused or who
have been denied sight of God. It’s not a painful place, just a
hopeless one.
- Dante misreads Virgil, which seems to
tick him off a
little. But notice how Dante mistakes and confuses the two tragic
emotions (according to Aristotle) of pity and fear. They have the
same countenance, ironically. What is pity looks like fear.
But it is pity. Worse it is self-pity. Virgil’s self-pity and his
lack of fear pretty much demonstrate his appropriateness for Limbo,
which he implicitly challenges because he doesn’t have the
self-awareness to see this himself. Dante the Poet sees it
clearly enough to present Virgil in an unflattering ironic light,
however; remember, he’s instructed Dante to leave all pity at the gate,
and here he is the grips of self-pity.
- Although he understands it all now, at
the time it was
devastating to discover that the great Virgil, his hero, should have to
suffer so. He carefully floats the question: is this fair?
Virgil describes Jesus’ harrowing of hell (without naming names) and
leaves it at that. I guess it’s fair, he seems to say, but I
wasn’t taken up, so I’m really not so sure. You decide for
yourself.
- Dante goes on to welcome himself into the
circle of great poets,
who with aspects “neither sad nor joyful” all embody, even in Limbo,
rational soul. They represent the control of emotion by reason.
- This area gives Dante the opportunity (p.
33) to provide his
readers with an extensive reading list, a detailed bibliography.
I know all of these guys, he tells you, so if you want to keep up,
you’d better know them, too.
Canto 5 … Circle 2, Lust
- Another gate signals we’re moving to a
new level, another
area. This is the first real place of punishment, not counting
the Neutrals, who were outside the entrance.
- At this Gate, Minos acts as “examiner”;
he’s the functionary, the
“judge” who is forced into the role of “connoisseur of sin.”
He’s, I think, the closest Dante can come to representing something
that seems a little ahead of his time: the machine. Not that
there weren’t medieval machines, but this one functions without
error. It’s notable that this is how Dante represents the “judge”
(the gatekeeper of justice)—in a system of perfect justice, you have to
have judges who are flawless. It’s an important position.
This is the gatekeeper for the whole system. If Minos makes a
mistake, justice is no longer perfect, no longer served. To
Dante’s world (of corrupt judges)? To our own world (of corrupt,
or inadequate, judges)? In this system there’s no fuzzy
interpretation, no human error. Minos just gets it right every
time. I find it a little ironic to see justice dispensed in so
machinelike a fashion. Would we want this or not?
- Virgil dispenses with Minos’ threat
easily, almost
off-handedly. Contrast this to his difficulty in Canto 8 and
9. Why is it so easy here and so difficult there? [The
answer to that is traced elsewhere, in the “Structure” notes.]
- More graphic auditory description greets
us in lines 23-34.
Anti-harmony evokes the misery of the atmosphere; and Dante uses
synethsesia—the mixing of sensory descriptions (i.e. “I am where/All
light is mute”) to achieve some interesting effects. The mute
light is followed by the bellowing ocean…but in other respects his
description is straightforward and realistic, designed to make you feel
like this place really exists and you are right there. The
hurricane winds are described as rending, twisting, tormenting—pretty
realistic.
- The carnal sinners’ contrapasso: those
swept by the figurative
winds of passion (“their reason mastered by desire”) are doomed to be
tossed in these literal winds for eternity. Seemingly, it’s not
the sex itself that’s being punished here; just the fact that it was so
out of control, out of bounds.
- Semiramis changed the law to suit her
needs (very much the same
way the Republican controlled Congress changed the law in an attempt to
keep Tom Delay from being indicted, but it didn’t work—he was indicted
anyway.)
- Dido betrayed her husband’s memory; tried
to keep Aeneas from
founding Rome
- Cleopatra’s wantonness made her a “slut”
- Helen’s lust for Paris sparked evil war
- On down the line to the courtly love
poets who wrote the medieval
romances
- Dante can’t take this too well. He
was love poet
himself. He takes pity on all these figures of passion and
romance. But notice how Dante the Poet emphasizes that at this
point Dante the Pilgrim is lost in pity’s “coils” which is highly
connotative. The serpent of pity? The labyrinth of
pity? The tempter that is pity?
- Listening to Francesca, you’d think she
was completely innocent
of anything. Her speech is masterful sophistry, persuading Dante
despite himself. The whole speech is self-serving; she makes
excuses for herself, subtly suggesting it was all Paolo’s fault.
The buck-passing could be the Garden of Eden all over again, where Adam
blames Eve, and Eve blames the serpent.
- • Dante is overwhelmed
with guilt and pity; he
swoons once again—he feels himself go slack, an interesting choice of
words, since it could have moral overtones; he’s overcome by spiritual
slackness as well as physical slackness. This time he swoons less
like one who sleeps and more like a “dying body.”
- • This scene represents
one of the book’s
mini-climaxes: in his struggle to understand “divine justice, Dante
swoons. He has a long way to go.
- • Readers interpret
this scene, one of the most
famous scenes in the book, and very widely depicted in paintings from
many parts of Europe, in different ways. Some interpret the scene
as Dante’s sympathy for passionate love. The scene demonstrates
that true love never dies, that it survives even in Hell, and that that
“moral lesson” about the sin of lust is overwhelmed by the humanity of
the lovers. Others see Dante cleverly demonstrating how seductive
and dangerous Francesca really is. She equates lust with love…how
could she? Then there’s Paolo. Why is he silent? Was
he the seducer or the victim in all this? All he can do is weep.
It’s interesting to note that in the translation of Lancelot that
Dante’s readers would have known, it is Guinevere who initiates the
kiss—it’s Guinevere who kisses Lancelot, not the other way around as
Francesca tells it (Lancelot kisses Guinevere; Paolo kisses her).
Francesca even blames the author of the book—anyone but herself.
This is Dante’s indictment of her: she refuses to accept responsibility
for her own actions.
Cantos 6,7,8
- The measure of any great work of art is
the way it masters form;
the structure of a great work of art can be as impressive as its
content. We’ve noted how the structure of the Inferno follows
certain patterns, that certain things repeat. In each circle
Dante meets a demon who has to be fended off; there’s a description of
the area; there’s the description of the contrapasso; there’s the
interaction with the sinners; there’s a transition to the next
canto. But Dante does not bore us with repetitiveness. He
adds variety to this structure while preserving its essential
characteristics. While we’re enjoying the variation, we’re still
perceiving the underlying unity of form. The result is something
that resembles the “theme and variations” forms produced by musicians
like Hayden, Mozart, and Beethoven.
- When Virgil assures Dante that Plutus is
no real obstacle at the
beginning of Canto 7 (p. 53), that’s a subtle change, but it
foreshadows another subtle change; Virgil prevents Dante’s request to
speak to the Hoarders and Wasters in this circle. The emphasis is
shifting slightly to Virgil’s lesson about “Fortune” (from Aristotle)
(lines 70-96). The arrangement is further varied by the inclusion
of sinners and contrapasso (still no intervention) before the
transition which brings us to the tower of Dis.
- In Canto 8, the subtle imbalance in the
formal structure
continues, yet the elements are still the same, just shuffled.
There’s still the transition to the new area; the demon Phylegas is
encountered and rebuked; Dante interacts with Fillipo Argenti.
But there are interesting variations to notice. This is the first
time Dante expresses no pity for the sinner he meets. On the
contrary, he things the punishment should be tougher. Virgil
gives him the equivalent of a big high-five for this progression.
Also, for the first time, Virgil takes an active role in the
discussion, speaking directly to both Dante and Argenti. When
Virgil praises Dante for his reaction to Argenti, this takes the place
of the “strife of pity” conflict we’ve been seeing—and it represents a
progression in that conflict. The major alteration comes when not
one but many demons (a thousand!) appear to block their way. When
the fallen angels threaten the travelers, Dante and Virgil, for the
first time are stopped. For the first time, Virgil seems has to
leave Dante alone to parlay. It’s a crisis point.
- It’s at this crisis point when Dante
makes his first address to
the reader. These addresses are rare and when they appear they
are usually significant. Here Dante merely asks the reader to
imagine how terrified he was, how he immediately lost all faith in his
guide and their journey. In this state, he turns to Virgil
looking for protection, begging him to stay by his side, showing how he
can be turned around. Virgil’s reply is ironic considering the
action that follows! He promises never to leave him, then he
leaves him. You can imagine Dante was not pleased; he was left in a
state of fear and doubt, with “yes and no vying in his head”—what was
the question he was asking himself, do you think?
- That Virgil loses is significant.
The fallen angels have
blocked their way. This is a difficult crisis for both teacher
and pupil. Virgil is shaken but determined as he tries to
reassure Dante. Unfortunately, he is also overly proud, declaring
that he will “conquer this crew.”
- Notice how in this canto the emphasis has
fully shifted from the
sinners to the demons in charge of the sinners. The demons have
become as primary a focus as the sinners. Also, Dante’s growing
strength in the battle against pity (his encounter with Argenti) is
counterbalanced by Virgil’s diminished strength in rebuking the
demons. The allegorical message behind this becomes clearer in
Canto 9. But notice how Dante uses the structure of the work to
become a vehicle for meaning.
Canto 9
- This is one of the major climaxes of the
work. The journey has
been stopped completely. The focus on sinners has given way to
focus on the demons. More demons are introduced: the Furies, who
are worse than the fallen angels. When they threaten, Virgil
again moves to protect Dante.
- At the climax of fear and despair, Dante
addresses the reader
directly once again: “O you whose mind is clear:/Understand well the
lesson that underlies/The veil of these strange verses I have
written” (lines 61-63). What’s Dante getting at here?
Why this injunction to “figure it out”? We’re invited to unravel
the allegory; Dante wants us to get beyond the narrative action to its
meaning: have faith, and don’t be proud; this is the result.
- The anonymous messenger from Heaven that
blows the enemy away
with tornado force is pretty dramatic! This was beyond Virgil’s
power, beyond the power of Reason. Divine intervention was
necessary…and the force of Dante’s poetry rises to the task of
describing this supernatural power that sweeps the threat cleanly
away. Notice the vivid simile on p. 73 (top)—the demons scatter
like so many frogs jumping into a pond.
- The Messenger lectures the demons about
trying to twart “fate”—it
can’t be done. You can almost hear Dante lecturing himself here
about accepting his bad fortune as an exile. It’s human nature to
“butt against fate” because we have free will, but here in the inferno,
the sinners have forfeited all of that. Once you give up your
humanity, the Divine Will takes over, there is no free will.
Divine Will is master in the afterlife.
- The canto takes into the city of Dis,
where we meet the heretics,
and the structure begins again, with a description of the area,
interaction with the sinners, etc. In Canto 10, Dante meets
Farinata, one of the Inferno’s more infamous, unforgettable characters.
Canto 10
- Virgil has been demoralized by his
failure before the gate of
Dis; Dante isn’t too happy with him either. At the beginning of
this canto, Dante is really sarcastic as when he addresses Virgil, “O
matchless power.. who lead me through evil’s circles at your will...”
There’s a serious rift between them; Dante flatters him ironically,
sarcastically; they are both being dishonest with one another. Virgil
is literally and physically pushing Dante around at the beginning of
the canto. What will restore them? The interaction with
Farinata in Circle 6, the Heretics, seems to smooth the ruffled
feathers.
- Francesca was the challenge to
understanding and judgment in
Canto 5, and Farinata poses the same kind of challenge here.
Farinata is a heretic (a follower of Epicurus), and worse, a leader of
heretics; Virgil explains the sin, but we have to see it in action to
really understand its nature and its contrapasso. The open tomb
recalls Christ’s escape from death; these sinners, who denied the
importance of death by denying the existence of life after death, are
trapped in that which they should have escaped (contrapasso).
- His chest swells with pride (p. 79)—the
political warrior whose
will to power kills a lot of innocent people
- He’s more concerned with life on earth,
still (the earthly fate
of his descendants)
- He’s stubborn, “stiff-necked” both
intellectually and in his
demeanor; this destroys him. He despised Hell (and God) in life
so he must despise them in death; he can’t repent
- Farinata’s conversation with Dante is
about Florentine history
and politics. Dante is led into a discussion that, veiled in
courtesy, is really combat. Dante almost lets his patriotism
degenerate into political factionalism, the same as his concept of love
was challenged by Francesca’s description of lust in Canto 5.
- Farinata recognizes Dante’s speech as
“courteous”—they meet as
sophisticated gentlemen…
Canto 11
- A static canto; much is explained about
the layout of the land,
what’s to come; the intriguing medieval philosophy behind it all…
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