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Course Syllabi and Announcements LIT 165 Syllabus LIT 165 Announcements and Assignments WRT 120 Syllabus WRT 120 Announcements and Assignments
Notebook for Topics in Literature: Imaginary Worlds (Spring 2008) A Reading of THE TEMPEST
Notebook for Topics in Literature: Rites of Passage (Spring 2006) Goals of the Course Fundamental Questions about Literature Valuing Literature Critical Thinking and Reading Literature Critical Approaches to Literature Literature as ART Ambiguity Approaching the Art of Fiction Defining the Short Story Evaluating Short Fiction Craft of Fiction: PLOT Craft of Fiction: CHARACTER Small Group Exercise ARABY by James Joyce WHERE ARE YOU GOING, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? by Joyce Carol Oates Our RITES OF PASSAGE Theme A note about GIRL POE and the art of STORY OF A HOUR THE YELLOW WALLPAPER YOUNG MAN ON SIXTH AVENUE Notes on Innovative Fiction Assignment Sheet for Paper #1 Fiction and Ambiguity - Your Questions Writing Workshop - Short Fiction Poetry Journal Project Assignment Sheet LITERARY SYNTHESIS PROJECT Defining Poetry Reading Poetry The Craft of Poetry Drama and Tragedy Study Questions: DEATH OF A SALESMAN
Notebook for Effective Writing I (Spring 2006) Paper #4 Assignment Sheet Critical Thinking and Commentary Casebook: Evaluating Sources Worksheet Selecting Information Evaluating Arguments CASEBOOK PROJECT Assignment Sheet Approaching Persuasive Writing Topic Development - Profile Essay Generating Ideas for the Profile Essay Paper #2 Assignment Sheet Profile Exercise Analyzing THE FIVE BEDROOM, SIX FIGURE ROOTLESS LIFE Objective Writing: Selected Readings Writing Workshop: Paper #1 Expressive Writing in the NYTimes Writing Effective Introductions and Conclusions Paper #1: IDENTITY Expressive Writing Open Letter Exercise and Examples EMERSON on Individuality vs. Conformity Literature related to IDENTITY Understanding the 'Rhetorical Situation'
Go Exploring Weblog for WRT 120 Writing Assistance on the Web Blackboard at WCU WCU Homepage WCU's Francis Harvey Green Library
Notebook for Topics in Literature: Imaginary Worlds (Fall 2005) One Last Look at Imaginary Worlds Franz Kafka's BEFORE THE LAW Analyzing WAITING FOR GODOT Approaching WAITING FOR GODOT Paper #3: Assignment Sheet Paper #4: Independent Project The Problem of Stability in BRAVE NEW WORLD UTOPIA/DYSTOPIA Links Analyzing Huxley's BRAVE NEW WORLD Defining Utopia Embarking on Huxley's BRAVE NEW WORLD A Reading of Shakespeare's THE TEMPEST From today's news (11/3/05) Assignment Sheet for Paper #2 Goodbye to Dante's Imaginary World Stepping Through Dante's Inferno: Cantos 10-34 Stepping Through Dante's Inferno: Cantos 1-10 INFERNO: Questions/Analysis: Cantos 32-34 INFERNO: Questions/Analysis: Cantos 18-31 INFERNO: Questions for Analysis: Cantos 12-17 INFERNO: Structure INFERNO: Questions for Analysis: Cantos 1-5 INFERNO: Analyzing Canto 1 Relating to Dante's Inferno Approaching Dante's DIVINE COMEDY A Little Help with Dante's INFERNO Assignment Sheet for Paper #1 Notes on LEAF BY NIGGLE Responses to LEAF BY NIGGLE ON FAIRY STORIES: An Essay by Tolkien Notes on Axolotl Reading Ovid's Tales From Myth to Literature: Approaching Ovid's Tales Notes on THE EYE OF THE GIANT Functions of the Genesis Tales Analyzing Mythic Tales Defining Mythology Filtering the Introduction to FANTASTIC WORLDS Commentary on LA BELLE DAME SANS MERCI by Keats Commentary on DARKNESS by Byron Handout: Imagination Poems Set What is Imagination? Our Course Theme: Imaginary Worlds LIT 165 Assignments: Fall 2005 LIT 165 Announcements: Fall 2005 Imaginary Worlds: Course Syllabus
Notebook for Effective Writing I (Fall 2005) Paper #4: Independent Thinking/Reading/Writing Casebook Preparation Checklist Casebook Assignment Schedule Evaluating Sources for the Casebook Casebook Project Assignment Sheet Notes on Rational Argument Argument Assignment Sheet: Objective Writing Reviewing Elements of the Profile Essay Writing the Profile Essay Readings: Objective Writing Assignment Sheet: Expressive Writing Rubric for Evaluation of Writing About SKIN DEEP Emerson on Individuality vs. Conformity Mind-map: Identity Understanding the 'Rhetorical Situation' Assignments Page Announcements Page WRT 120 Course Syllabus for Fall 2005
ENG Q20: Basic Writing
Go Exploring Weblog for WRT 120 Writing Assistance on the Web Blackboard at WCU WCU Homepage WCU's Francis Harvey Green Library
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WRITING WORKSHOP
FOR PAPER #1
EXPRESSIVE WRITING
Use the questions below as a guide
to help you provide feedback on your partner’s rough draft.
WRITING
FUNDAMENTALS
- Is the paper
effectively focused? What is the writer’s controlling idea or
thesis? Is the thesis effectively stated (if it’s an essay) or strongly
implied (if it’s a narrative)?
- Is the paper
effectively developed? Where could the writer add more detail, or
improve on the detail that’s already there? Is there too much
detail—should the writer make any cuts?
- If you are
reading an essay, are all three parts of an essay structure
present? How engaging is the introduction? Could the writer use
one of the strategies suggested in class more effectively? Does
the body of the paper fully develop the thesis? Is the conclusion
memorable?
- Is the paper
effectively arranged/organized? Is there a logical order to the
discussion? Are there any unnecessary tangents?
NARRATION:
Telling the Story
First, identify the kind of
narration the writer is using—a single incident, a series of related
incidents, or a longer period of time? Then, use the following
questions to help you evaluate the narrative:
- Does this
moment in time have a definable beginning, middle, and end? Are
these points in the story easy to find?
- Will readers
be able to see any drama in this story? Does it reveal and then
resolve a conflict that’s at the heart of what’s happening?
- How well is
the story paced? Are there places where the story drags or places
where it moves too quickly? Has the writer chosen the right scenes to
dwell on and the right scenes to summarize?
- Are the
characters in the story vivid?
- Has the
writer or should the writer include dialogue? Where does dialogue
seem necessary or unnecessary? Where might dialogue make the
story more vivid? How could the dialogue be improved?
- Do the
various incidents all support the paper’s controlling idea?
- Does the
writer use effective transitions to get you from one scene to the next,
or from one incident to the next? Will readers see the logical or
chronological connections between scenes?
DESCRIPTION:
Creating the Mental Image
- Are people,
places, things—as well as ideas and feelings—made vivid through
descriptive strategies discussed in class? Where can the writer
use more sensory detail, more connotative language, more figurative
language?
- Does the
writer’s way of describing something help express his or her feelings
or ideas about it?
- Does the
writer’s way of describing something reinforce the paper’s controlling
idea?
- Does the
writer reveal character by direct statement or by allowing readers to
infer what people are like from what they say or do?
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